Bertie looked longingly at the lovely Princess Beatrice, remembering how he used to stroll with her down to the edge of the pond, and how she would always bring some bread for the Sadie the beautiful black swan and for all the ducks, coots and geese who would come quacking and honking up to greet her. He noticed that today she was carrying a silk bag over her shoulder, and every now and then she would stoop down to the ground and take something out of her bag and place it carefully under a vegetable or a leaf.
In this special Bertie Story for Easter, the annual Easter egg hunt in the palace garden is heading for disaster, and Prince Bertie the Frog is about to take the blame for eating the eggs belonging to the children.
Read by Natasha Lee Lewis. Duration 15 minutes.
Proofread by Claire Deakin.
It was springtime on the pond, and all the pond life were sitting by the edge of the water, looking out at all the lovely daffodils that were starting to spring up around the palace vegetable patch. Sadie the Swan was sighing, "I do love the spring, Bertie, because all the flowers make me feel so romantic..."
Colin the carp said, "I don't like flowers. People go on about their lovely smell, but I can't smell a thing, because I'm a fish."
Just then, Tim the Tadpole stuck his tiny head out of the water and spotted a young woman walking under the fruit trees and the vegetable patch.
"That's the most beautiful person I've ever seen," he said. "Who can she be, Bertie?"
"Why," said Bertie, "that's the lovely Princess Beatrice, of course." Then he croaked rather sadly because, as you probably know, when Bertie was a handsome prince, he was engaged to marry the lovely Princess Beatrice, but then her horrid stepmother turned him into a frog, and he misses his princess quite a bit sometimes. Now she was ever so close to the pond, but she didn't recognise Bertie, because he looked just like a green frog. But all the pond life gazed at her. They were fascinated to catch a glimpse of her royal loveliness of whom they had heard so much.
"What's she doing?" Asked Tim.
Bertie looked longingly at the lovely Princess Beatrice, remembering how he used to stroll with her down to the edge of the pond, and how she would always bring some bread for the Sadie the beautiful black swan and for all the ducks, coots and geese who who would come quacking and honking up to greet her. He noticed that today she was carrying a silk bag over her shoulder, and every now and then she would stoop down to the ground and take something out of her bag and place it carefully under a vegetable or a leaf. The things she was hiding so carefully looked like ostrich eggs, only instead of being white like usual eggs, they were all sorts of bright and attractive colours.
"What are those?" Asked Tim, who is a very curious tadpole, and is always asking loads and loads of questions.
"Those," said Bertie, "are Easter eggs." Tim opened his tiny mouth and was about to ask another question. But before he could ask, Bertie answered it. "This time of year is called Easter, and all the children who live in the palace, and all the children from the nearby villages, come to the palace gardens, and they hunt for Easter eggs. The rumour goes that they are hidden by the Easter bunnies - but because I was a prince, and princes know everything, I realised that really it was the lovely Princess Beatrice who hid them. Do you know what I used to do? I would watch her from the top of the palace tower through my telescope, and spot where all the biggest eggs were hidden... especially the ones with jelly beans inside, because those are my favourites."
"I didn't know you liked eggs," said Tim.
"These were chocolate eggs, Tim," said Bertie.
"What's chocolate?"
Now little Tim is known for asking some very silly questions, and quite often when he asks them, the other creatures on the pond go, "Tim, don't you know even that?" But this time they kept very quiet, because they were all eager to learn from Bertie what chocolate was. Bertie licked his lips with the memory of its taste.
"Chocolate, little Tim, is the most delicious food in the entire universe."
Colin the Carp, who is a very grumpy fish, and very seldom agrees with Bertie, or with anyone else for that matter, said, "You might like chocolate, but it's not nearly so tasty as a dead insect with a nice bit of mud on it. In fact, chocolate is not nice at all, unless you are a frog, and a stupid one at that."
"Oh yes it is," said Bertie.
"Oh no it isn't," said Colin.
"Oh yes it is," said Bertie.
Just then Sadie the Swan glided across the pond. "Tish tish boys. You're always quarrelling. Instead of arguing about it, why don't we try just one little piece of chocolate? Then we can all make our own minds up."
Bertie thought that was a wonderful idea, because it was a very long time now since he'd had any chocolate, and even longer since he'd had a jelly bean.
"Come on," boomed Bertie", "Let's go and hunt for Easter eggs."
So Bertie hopped through the grass, and Sadie waddled next to him. Tim came along for the ride on Bertie's back, and a family of ducks with six little ducklings followed them. Only Colin the Carp wasn't able to leave the pond, because he's a fish, and he can only swim in water. So instead, he snapped at a fly that was nearby, and missed it. "Humph," said Colin, and he sunk down to sulk at the bottom of the pond, because when there are no insects to eat, grumping and sulking is what Colin does to pass the time.
When Bertie and the pond life reached the vegetable patch, they found one egg hidden behind the broccoli, and another one behind the cauliflower, and another behind the beetroot, although Bertie didn't want to go too close to that one because he never liked beetroot when he was a prince.
Bertie found the eggs, and then Sadie rolled them back to the pond with her beak. One by one, all the animals tried the chocolate.
"Ah, bliss," said Bertie, as he flicked another jelly bean onto his froggy tongue. "This is the life."
"Yummy scrummy," said Tim, as he licked a piece of an egg that was at least fifty times bigger than he was. Tim's mother, who is a frog, looked on rather anxiously. She was worried in case he didn't leave any room for his dinner inside his tiny stomach. She was planning green slime that night, and green slime is full of good and important vitamins for a growing tadpole.
"Oh, oh," trilled Sadie. "I think it's the most delicious thing I've ever tasted. Even more scrumptious than crusts of soggy sliced bread."
"I suppose it is quite nice," said Colin the Carp, "if you've run out of flies that is."
Just then, Barker the palace dog bounced through the vegetable patch. Now Barker is quite a silly dog, and also quite greedy, and when he smelled chocolate, his big tongue hung out of his mouth and slobbered. Next he started to hunt for the eggs with his wet shiny nose. Each time he found an egg, he went, "Woof, woof," and before Bertie could do anything about it, he ate it up. Bertie thought that he ought to stop Barker eating all the eggs, but when you are a frog, and no longer a brave prince with a prince's sword at your side, even a silly dog like Barker can seem quite frightening. So Bertie pretended not to notice Barker, and went on telling the other pond life stories about Easter time. When Barker had eaten six whole chocolate eggs, he started to dig a hole in the ground with his paws, and he buried all the other eggs, and covered them up with earth.
The next morning was Easter Sunday, and after church, Princess Beatrice led all the children into the garden, and they started hunting for the eggs. They looked behind the cauliflower, the cabbages, and even behind the beetroot, although none of them wanted to go near the beetroot very much.
But they couldn't find any of the eggs. Not a single one!
"Oh, that's funny," said Princess Beatrice. "I'm sure they are here somewhere."
"These are stupid children," said her stepmother, who is very wicked and rather horrid.
Some of the children started to cry, because they were looking forward to finding the eggs so very much.
Colin the carp said, "Well now, Prince Bertie the Frog. Just see what you've done. You've upset the little children because you're so greedy."
Bertie thought that wasn't very fair of Colin, especially as he knew that it was Barker the dog who had eaten most of the eggs. But he wasn't in the mood to quarrel with a grumpy fish. He felt too sad, because he could see the children didn't have any eggs. Then he had a great idea. "Come Barker," he said, calling over to the silly dog.
He hopped onto Barker's back, and told him to run to the palace kitchen. He was a bit nervous, because really he was rather frightened of Barker, but he held on tight, and closed his eyes, and in a minute they were in the kitchens.
Now Bertie knew where the cook kept the special supply of eggs for the king, Bertie's father, because sometimes, when Bertie was a prince, he used sneak into the kitchen and borrow one - although he never actually gave it back, on account of having eaten it.
He got Barker to pick up the bag of eggs in his mouth, and then they ran back to the vegetable patch. By the time they returned, all the children were crying, and even the lovely Princess Beatrice had tears in her gorgeous green eyes. Just then, Barker said, "Woof woof," because he was a rather silly dog, and that was what he always said when he saw somebody. As he opened his mouth, the bag fell down, and the eggs rolled out onto the ground.
"Found one," shouted one of the children.
"Found one," shouted another. In the next few moments, each of the children had found an egg.
The children cheered and Barker pranced around and woofed excitedly. The lovely Princess Beatrice just happened to have some special doggy treats in her handbag, and she gave him a handful, which he licked up in no time.
"Oh Bertie, said Sadie the Swan. "That was so brave. You've made all the little children so thrilled."
Now if you promise not to tell anybody, I'll let you into a secret. Do you promise? Okay. Then I'll tell you. That evening, after it began to get dark, Barker the dog sneaked down to the vegetable patch. He sniffed out the hole where he had buried the remaining eggs. Then he dug them up with his front paws, and he and Bertie stuffed themselves on chocolate and jelly beans until they both felt quite sick - but very happy. So perhaps Barker isn't such a silly dog after all.
And that's the storynory of Bertie's Easter Egg hunt.
Read 203 comments below:
That was a nice and exciting story. If you like to know how we do the Easter Egg Hunting in Norway, take a look at my blog:
http://rennybasblog.blogspot.com/2006/04/easter-egg-hunt.html
RennyBA — April 17, 2006
Hi I accidentally deleted this story from my computer and have been trying to get it back, for some reason it isn’t downloading either on this website or through iTunes. Could you please try to resolve this problem as it is my little boy’s absolute favourite story! Thanks.
Joanne — July 3, 2006
Joanne, Very sorry this is not downloading. Normally I would be able to fix it right away, but I’m on a trip a long way from our back-up files.
This audio file is sitting on the US internet archive which seems to be having problems. Hopefully it will sort it out soon, but in anycase, I will change things over to our own hosting company next week.
Sorry for delay. We are really glad that your son likes this story, and we will restore it as soon as we can!
Hugh – on behalf of Bertie.
Bertie — July 4, 2006
This story is still not downloading- hope a fix is on its way!
Frustrated — October 13, 2006
Dear Frustrated, huge apologies, Bertie’s Easter Hunt is now downloading
Bertie — October 14, 2006
this story was good, but i did not like that you said that the easter bunny did not exist, because some kids belive in the bunny, 🙁
any way i like the story.
Gloria — March 14, 2007
Gloria, you are right. The bunny got in touch to say he was quite cross with us for implying he might be made-up, so it looks like he does exist after all.
We are going to be a lot more careful in future about our opinions on who might or might not exist
Bertie — March 14, 2007
Thanks! keep that in mind
Gloria 2 — March 14, 2007
i love ester eggs
tirne — May 29, 2007
it is a good story
abriah — October 17, 2007
Chocklete is poison to dogs so why did “barker” not die?
Starchild — December 9, 2007
Starchild,
Most dogs I know do eat chocolate, but it is true that large quantities of chocolate are meant to be poisonous for dogs.
Bertie says that he and Barker had sore tummies in the morning – but they were both ok later on.
Bertie — December 9, 2007
THIS WAS GREAT THANKS IT REMINDED ME OF MY BUNNY THAT IS SLEEPING RIGHT NOW. THIS MAY SOUND WIERD NATASHA BUT I HAVE A BABY LAMB I HAVE TO TO TAKE CARE OF IT UNTIL IT IS A BIG LAMB I NAMED HIM BAMBI
MONIQUE
MONIQUE — January 1, 2008
nothing will load on this site
anonamous — January 9, 2008
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JTG — February 7, 2008
ie likes chocolate eggs
i.e — February 17, 2008
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Anonymous — February 18, 2008
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nick.com — February 18, 2008
I THOUGHT THAT IT WAS EXPRESSIVE.
Domenic — March 10, 2008
wheres the easter bunny! I like the story but where is it its a easter story easter story needs a bunny
georgette — March 11, 2008
it wont download pls do it for me
stardust — March 11, 2008
Georgette –
Perhaps the bunny is hiding. Try the Monkey Who Loved Chocolate.
Bertie — March 11, 2008
Stardust Please try this back up file
Bertie — March 11, 2008
I liked it!
lorenzo — March 16, 2008
i really liked this story
emma — March 19, 2008
cool story
natalie — March 19, 2008
the story was exsited and fantastic
THE END
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joshua — March 20, 2008
It is very bad
??? — March 23, 2008
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Earl — March 23, 2008
That’s very interesting! It’s very good! I like the story very much! This is good for Chinese! It is useful for us to learn English better!
hanson — March 24, 2008
Commonly.
Which people imitate me,the real and bigness Earl
Real Earl — March 24, 2008
who the heck would not like choclate
Real Earl — March 24, 2008
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Ella — March 29, 2008
I am 250.Ye!!!!!!!!!!!!!thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I am very happy!
xie guang xiao — March 29, 2008
I know something about the story .
yishabeia — March 30, 2008
nice story!
Can I ask a question?
Where is this web site made?
US?
Emily — March 30, 2008
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zzy — April 8, 2008
good
qz — April 13, 2008
I think that this story is wonderful.
James — April 21, 2008
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michael — September 14, 2008
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michael — September 14, 2008
i love you guys
michael — September 14, 2008
ME TO MICHAEL PELLITTERI
michael — September 14, 2008
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michael — September 14, 2008
i loVE THIS STORY PLEASE MAKE MORE 🙂
Anonymous — September 26, 2008
this is a realy good story 😀
starcream — November 24, 2008
:)I like thes story.Thank you.
??? — January 20, 2009
That’s very interesting! It’s very good! I like the story very much! This is good for Chinese! It is useful for us to learn English better!
??? — January 20, 2009
:)I like this story.Thank you!
??? — January 20, 2009
This is my favorite story.
rosa — January 26, 2009
Berties easter rocks
Mohib — January 27, 2009
**Answer me Bertie!!!**
I think it is a great story once you put in more pictures. And Bertie, you are handsome!
Loyal fan
Michelle
Michelle — February 10, 2009
^v^Answer me Bertie^v^!!
I think this could be a great story, well, only if you put more pictures,that is. And Bertie, don’t forget to answer me, Bertie. And can you wait for spring? I can’t,
Loyal fan
Phoebe.
^^Phoebe^^ — March 1, 2009
I really liked the story but it would be more intresting if u’ll add sound effects.
Best wishes.
Salwa — March 23, 2009
HAHAHA~ I like chocolate eggs. But I don’t see…. ?-;;
FROG — April 3, 2009
Spelling error.
The dog, Barker was spelled baker.So Bertie pretended not to notice Baker
Pls take note.
Charm — April 5, 2009
is tim famous for asking silly questions?
tommy — May 8, 2009
Tommy, Tim is very famous for his silly questions
Bertie — May 8, 2009
i luv chocolate
tommy — May 8, 2009
Kewl. and btw(by the way) youtube isnt my website i just put it on there to show my vaforite web!!
peace!! 🙂
Hannah — May 8, 2009
cool story !!!!! i love it
my best one of you bertie but really i do like the easter bunny and i tought i existed
ria — August 30, 2009
i love you berie kiss kiss kiss
ria — August 30, 2009
i told the secret!(in my mind)
neil — September 3, 2009
I like storynory, I listen everynight. But I don’t like chocolate! I’m nine years old.
Charis — October 9, 2009
Charis, if you don’t like chocolate, then you are just like the character in our story The Monkey Who Loved Chocolate, and who gave his chocolate bar to Theo. So you are not alone. I like dark chocolate by the way, and I don’t eat the milk chocolate stuff. Thanks for listening every night. That’s wonderful !
Bertie — October 9, 2009
Nice story!
mrka911 — November 23, 2009
who is natasha? cuz like how does she live near bertie? if shes a maid for beatrice why doesnt she just tell beatrice?
anonymous — December 17, 2009
I hate it when you say from me natasa bye bye so could you stop i hope i am not being mean tell me if i am could you please write me soon oh and your storys are so cool i love bertie he is so cool i really hope that he terns back into a prince – Quinn
Quinn — February 27, 2010
Dear Quinn, we have a lot of Stories will the “bye bye” on them, and they will stay that way, because it will take a lot of time to change them. But we will think about doing it differently on the new ones. In general we understand that our audience is a little older than when we started, and perhaps the sign off isn’t quite the right tone. Just think of it as a little joke.
Bertie — February 27, 2010
oh and i am 8 years old today
Quinn — February 27, 2010
i love choclate, when you asked. my mum always dose a tresure hunt on easter sunday.
chantal — March 6, 2010
this is the best story i ever heard
sheyenne — March 24, 2010
I love this story so much! 🙂
victoria — March 29, 2010
Sorry for the question, but I am very interested in how CMS operates a blog?
sergey911 — April 20, 2010
Sear sergey911
This is run on WordPress
Bertie — April 20, 2010
I like the easter Birdie stories, and I also like the Gladys stories. I want to be a singer in rock band when I grow up.
cheers Ginger age five in Sacramento, Ca, USA, planet earth
Ginger — June 28, 2010
To Bertie.
Thank you
sergey — June 28, 2010
Hi, I can’t understand how to add your site in my rss reader. Can you Help me, please
It sounds like you’re creating problems yourself by trying to solve this issue instead of looking at why
their is a problem in the first place.
XoknO — July 28, 2010
OxknO, Sorry you are having problems with your RSS reader. Just copy and paste this link
http://feeds.feedburner.com/storynory
into the subscribe area
Bertie — July 28, 2010
love it so so so much
the dog — November 4, 2010
It’s so fun
Eric — November 17, 2010
I love this story so so so so much
Eric — November 17, 2010
I love Barker.Hes silly!
Isaiah — December 8, 2010
nymph ful and eligible
Anna — December 10, 2010
so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so AWSOME!!!
awsome t dude — January 24, 2011
so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so
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awsome t dudet — February 14, 2011
Bertie i love your story`s so much!!!!!!!!!!!!
SmokeingLeek3 — March 7, 2011
Very nice really enjoyed it. Bertietastic…..!
Nish — March 13, 2011
Thank you Nish,
Bertie is always pleased to hear good things about the stories.He is writing another Bertie adventure at present, so look out for that to come.
Bye Bye
N*
Natasha — April 23, 2011
That’s a great story!!! P.S. Bertie, What’s your favorite story? Also, what is your favorite kind of candy?
R.S.P.V.
Chrystella :-) — April 1, 2011
I like this story! This is the best story ever! Hmmmm…I love your stories, Natasha! You’re the best storyteller ever!
Raina (age 5) — April 19, 2011
Thank you Raina,
This is an especially good Bertie story perfect for Easter time.
Bye Bye
N*
Natasha — April 23, 2011
Nice Bertie !!!! that really was brave and noble of you…COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;)
I'm COOL!!! — April 21, 2011
Hi Jenny
Thank you for your comment, and for listening to Bertie and the Easter egg Hunt.
Bye Bye
N*
Natasha — April 24, 2011
it is a beatiful story
manzia — April 26, 2011
i had u dreamd last night
caleb — May 1, 2011
AWSOME!!!
Julianna — June 28, 2011
so cool and awsome i loved it and tim is the best charicter
james — July 4, 2011
It was so cool I am going want to visit every day. Bertie I had a look at your
cool,cool,cool,cool,cool,cool storys and they are great. Bertie I hope you will turn into a prince some day and get your princess. Bye Bertie
Mary — July 24, 2011
July 24 2011 at3.19
It was a super,super,super,super story.
Bertie I had a look at your
cool,cool,cool,cool,cool,cool storys and they are great. Bertie I hope you will turn into a prince some day and get your princess. Bye Bertie
Mary — July 24, 2011
HI
I LIKE A LOT THIS STORY, BECAUSE I LOVE CHOCOLATE
SOFÍA — September 2, 2011
Dogs can’t eat chocolate! They will die because it is like poison to them.
Iwillremainanonymous — September 29, 2011
good thing theo the monkey is not there
micki — December 17, 2011
(please wright back)Bertie why couldent the dog smell
Dorian — January 2, 2012
Dear Dorian, I don’t know, why couldn’t the dog smell?
Bertie — January 3, 2012
becouse it did not have a nose haha write back
Dorian — January 3, 2012
Dear Dorian, very funny !
Bertie — January 3, 2012
bertie dont you know the joke from agent bertie?
Dorian — January 3, 2012
Dear Dorian, I thought it sounded a bit familiar.
Bertie — January 3, 2012
i looooooooooooove your bertie stories,Bertie
Dorian — January 3, 2012
this song is so stupied only cool people will not listen to this
haileypooo — February 18, 2012
Very funny!!
kidd — March 26, 2012
I THINK ITS FANDABBY DOSEY
gobble — March 30, 2012
Chocolate is poison to dogs so why did “Barker” not die??????????????????????????????????
JUN — March 31, 2012
thanks for this story
sarah — April 7, 2012
I’ve been telling all my friends about Bertie and around 200 of them see Bertie’s stories so why doesnt Bertie still change back?
Ben — April 12, 2012
really good
hhh — April 16, 2012
I love the story
Betty — April 16, 2012
Hello but may I ask how about the king did he get any because if he did not I am sure he is very angry.
issy — April 26, 2012
looveeeeeeeeeee!eeeeed ittttt
rookie — June 12, 2012
yeah then they would have to hide eggs all over again
rookie — June 12, 2012
HAHA I thought the dogs name was BAKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
chocolate cheesecake — August 24, 2012
it was great!
hiba — October 25, 2012
I love love love love love love love love love love love love choalot !!!!!!
I.l.t.s.m. — November 15, 2012
Guys CHILL!!!!
This is just a story
The dog won’t die in a story!!!!!!!
He won’t die even if the chocolate is poisonous for him, because this is JUST A STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yasmine — November 17, 2012
so nice a story I would surely be sorry had I not read. it keep up the great work. 🙂
Emma — December 29, 2012
I LOVE this story! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Meghan — January 7, 2013
please write back, Bertie and Natasha
I saw the lady in my dream, from the story 12 dancing princesses.
I wished that Bertie would turn into a princes.
Has he turned into a princess?
johann — January 19, 2013
dear Bertie,i will listen to your storynorys every night so you can be turned into a prince more fastly
kaitie — January 20, 2013
I’ll read a story each day so you turn into a prince again.
kate — January 20, 2013
There is a kid I know who doesn’t like chocolate. Actually, he is scared of it. Today in school I had a chocolate chip cookie, and when I waved it in front of his face he hid from it. It was sort of funny and weird.
422 — January 29, 2013
Bertie are you sick now I love story, nory is barcka ok I wonder if the lovly princess birtress is butiful and helps the pond life?
Miranda — February 1, 2013
so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so AWSOME and COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
angel — March 30, 2013
this stoy was very enteresting
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christian — April 1, 2013
suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper awsome story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
asia cute — April 1, 2013
Happy april fools everyone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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asia cute — April 1, 2013
So so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Annie — April 7, 2013
coolio
Justin — April 8, 2013
I love this story
Lily — April 9, 2013
so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so AWSOME!!!and cool.this book is great.
makayla — April 16, 2013
I found it really cool for the little kids and it is really nice and exciting.
Emma — May 8, 2013
I love this story it is brilliant my son loves it 😮
poop — May 15, 2013
Chocolaty story
Nisha — July 30, 2013
Funny exciting and sily!
Iona — August 5, 2013
why would colin be so mean?! i mean i know you love them but alll of them?! i have to agree with sadie by the way you are wonderful
brinda — August 16, 2013
I thank you for all the effort that you have put in this site! i´m just learning English Thank you very much.
jose — November 7, 2013
You are most welcome, Jose
Bertie — November 7, 2013
Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Tyler — April 4, 2014
fantastic story i really enjoyed it and love to readit again
dan — April 17, 2014
fantastic story i really enjoyed it and love to read it again
dan — April 17, 2014
did bertie got fat
nelson — May 2, 2014
Dear Barty. Whay don’t you make a movy or somthing I love your story’s. J.P
Joshua — May 18, 2014
Dear Joshua, a movie would be rather expensive, but if some studio wants to make it that would be great.
Bertie — May 18, 2014
Oh no~ Bertie!!
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Wayne — June 20, 2014
I don’t like chocolate.
Nitai — October 20, 2014
cute
sadie — November 6, 2014
So so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so so COOL!!!!!!!
Jaz — November 12, 2014
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Ash — December 2, 2014
Bertie
If people are grumpy it only stays for a little while not forever
Why is it different for Colin?
Jaz — December 4, 2014
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alice — February 3, 2015
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alice — February 11, 2015
Hey the Easter bunny NEVER comes to my house!
Hope — April 5, 2015
I LIKE it WHEN it was not the Easter Bunny .BY.
MAYA hundertmark — April 12, 2015
I REALLY REALLY REALLY LIKE THIS STORYΩ
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NINJA1009 — May 11, 2015
i like it
house — May 11, 2015
that was lovly
reuben — May 13, 2015
I love it??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Lilly??? — June 1, 2015
I like this story ?? ??
Isabelle — March 31, 2016
i like it but not too many.
anabella — May 5, 2016
The story Bertie’s Easter Egg hunt is awesome make more plz :D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Laura Allen — March 6, 2017
Wow
Anonymous — April 4, 2017
I like it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fiona — April 8, 2017
Luv your story please make more greek myths they are the best stories ever
Ashlyn — April 12, 2017
yes I liked the story.
gavin — April 18, 2017
I liked this story
Nazayda — April 18, 2017
I love chocolate but I hate jelly beans
Any way good story !!!
Allie — April 20, 2017
I love the story so much it was amazing I love the story for me it was very cool
Viveka — April 23, 2017
nice story.
Vasky — April 26, 2017
I made my own story | |
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S.S.C. — April 27, 2017
cool it is very cool so cool its great
Anonymous — April 30, 2017
Good stories and they are FREE! that’s nice.
Leo — May 5, 2017
I’ve seen other kids open Easter eggs, but never had one myself. Every year I’m sick to join the fun.
Isha from haccetstown, nj, usa — May 7, 2017
i like it
amiya — May 16, 2017
hi my name is Cooper soososssoosososososososososososososososoosososososoososoososoososoososoososoosoosoosooooooooooooooosssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooosssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssoooooooooooooooooooooosssssssssssssooooooooooooooosssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiieegeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Cooper — June 15, 2017
Nice story Bretie!!☺.
Taha — June 16, 2017
I love your story’s the best thing ever is a good chocoLat I Love Easter egg hunt I am SO woryd abowt you so I Love you bye see yu don’t want to be yu Kathryn +I’m a fan🍰🍦🍧🍭🍩🍿🍬🍫🍪🍿🍡🍨🍮🍕🍔🌭🌮🎂 and I have no clue who that spy off thequ
kaTHRYN — August 13, 2017
if this is a dog then wouldnt barker die bacause chocolate is poison to a dog?
todd — August 31, 2017
I looooooooved the story so so so so so much.
PS.I read this story @ school
Caydence — October 22, 2017
Wow, I seriously cannot believe that time goes by this fast. It’s been almost 6 years since I posted my last comment on here from like January 2012. So interesting to see this. I was like 8 years old. Thank you guys so much for providing these stories, I loved these, so much, and were a very great part of my childhood. I always got so excited whenever I would see a new story.
Dorian — December 16, 2017
Really good
Jordan — January 27, 2018
your awsome i love this book
jayden — February 2, 2018
u are the best story writer
ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jayden — February 2, 2018
the dog died !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
shadow king — February 9, 2018
I love love love love love love love love love 😻 love love love love love love love love love love love love ❤ 💝 🌹 💐 💕 🌹 💕 ❤ 💝 😻 🌹 🌈 😻 ❤ 💕 😻 💕 your story ‘s.
Declan — February 10, 2018
i❤thees stories.😚😚😚😚
Anonymous — February 12, 2018
10/10 it super awesome. P.S I likeTim so much!!!!
Rebecca. — February 16, 2018
I love it
Jeremih — February 19, 2018
Love it
Unicat — February 20, 2018
I love Easter eggs because You can eat Easter eggs but you will get sick.
DULCEE — March 26, 2018
I love all your stories I listen to them and they help me sleep
Zara — April 4, 2018
I love this story because it has a song in it you should lisen to it it is really fun to lisen to.
kaylee sidelinger — May 4, 2018
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