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Bertie’s Christmas Storynory

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Written by Bertie
Read by Natasha

This is the very first Bertie story - from Christmas 2005.
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Now, this morning it is a bit cold in this part of the world. Mr Frosty has been to visit, and the vegetable patch is white and glistening. There is ice on the pond.

“Brrrr,” said Colin the Carp. “It is too cold in this stupid pond.”

“You know what today is, don’t you?” said Bertie.

“Nope,” said Tim the Tadpole, who had not learned to say no properly yet.

“It is Christmas,” said Bertie.

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Bertie, Tim the Tadpole, Sadie the Swan, the lovely Princess Beatrice, and even Colin the Grumpy Carp, all wish you a Wonderful Christmas and a very Happy Holiday, wherever you are in the world!

Story by Bertie.

Read by Natasha. Duration 8 minutes.
Proofread by Claire Deakin.

Now, this morning it’s a bit cold in this part of the world. Mr Frosty has been to visit, and the vegetable patch is white and glistening. There’s ice on the pond.

“Brrrr,” said Colin the Carp. “It’s too cold in this stupid pond.”

“You know what today is, don’t you?” Said Bertie.

“Nope,” said Tim the Tadpole, who hadn’t learned to say, “no,” properly yet.

“It’s Christmas,” said Bertie.

“Not interested,” said Colin, who is a very grumpy fish, who doesn’t like anything much. Not even Christmas.

“What’s Christmas?” Asked Tim.

Everybody was used to little Tim asking stupid questions, but Prince Bertie was amazed that his friend hadn’t heard of Christmas.

“You don’t know about Christmas, young Tim,” boomed Bertie. “My, my. I’ll show you. Let’s go over to the palace.”

“But I can’t walk,” said Tim. “I haven’t got any legs.”

So Tim climbed onto Bertie’s back, and then Bertie hopped up the garden to the palace. Tim was a bit frightened, because he had never left the pond before.

“Hold on there, little Tim,” boomed Bertie, as he leaped up onto a ledge. They looked through the window. Tim was amazed, as he saw the Christmas tree with the lights sparkling on it. He saw all the children opening their presents, and the huge feast on the table.

“I’ve never seen anything so magical, Bertie,” he said. “How I wish we could have Christmas down on the pond.”

Bertie felt a little tear in his froggy eye as he thought of all the lovely Christmases he had enjoyed when he was a prince, opening hundreds of presents, and stuffing himself with chocolates, mince pies and cake until he felt quite sick. He remembered how in the afternoon, when he had taken his nap, he would go out onto the balcony of the palace and make a special Christmas speech to all the crowds of people who came to see him. “May you all be happy this coming year,” he would say, “And thank you for all the toys and lovely presents you sent me for Christmas.”

Then Princess Beatrice, who is as kind as she is beautiful, would go to the hospital, and give some of Bertie’s toys to the poorly little children who were spending Christmas there. Prince Bertie had so many toys, that he didn’t really mind letting her give some away, although he probably would have minded if somebody not quite so lovely as Princess Beatrice had done it.

So Bertie sat on the window ledge remembering all the happy Christmases he had spent in the past. Then he remembered how he had been turned into a frog, and how the lovely Princess Beatrice could no longer marry him. He would never spend another Christmas with Princess Beatrice now. “Sniff sniff, croak croak,” he said, because this was the saddest Christmas Day he had ever spent.

Just then, as Bertie was crying some more froggy tears, the door of the palace opened. The noise startled Bertie, and he fell from the window ledge onto the ground. “Argghhh,” he croaked. “Eeeekkkkk,” yelped Tim.

“Oh, look, there’s a frog,” said Princess Beatrice, as she stepped onto the pathway.

She picked him up in her hand and carried him back to the pond. She didn’t even notice little Tim who was clinging by his tail with all his might, hanging on to Bertie’s big toe.

Bertie felt very happy to be so close to Princess Beatrice again, because he loved her so very much. But he also felt a bit sad, because she didn’t realise he was Prince Bertie at all and just thought he was a frog.

How he longed to be a prince again! “Croak croak,” he said. Princess Beatrice just laughed because she could not understand any of his croaks. Then she put him down by the side of the pond, and she took a mince pie out of her handbag, where she always kept nice things in case she saw a little child or a furry animal to whom she could give a present. “I’m sure all the creatures who live in the pond would like that,” she said, in the loveliest, gentlest voice that Tim the Tadpole had ever heard.

Colin the Grumpy Carp wanted to look out of the water at her, but he banged his head on the ice. “Mince pies!” He grumped. “I don’t like them. Why can’t she give us some dead insects?”

“Oh, do be quiet Colin,” said Sadie the beautiful black swan. “I think Christmas is lovely. I think we should celebrate it every year on the pond from now on.”

If enough children keep listening to Bertie’s Stories, perhaps by next year he will have turned back into a prince and he can marry the lovely Princess Beatrice. Then the royal couple will come down to the pond and bring lots and lots of mince pies and Christmas Pudding and fat juicy flies for the pond life to enjoy a super duper lunch.

So tell all your friends to go to Storynory.com, to visit Bertie, and hear all his stories, so maybe next year Bertie will be able to open all his presents again in the palace with Princess Beatrice.

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this is very nace i like onli the games

rocio — November 18, 2006
i did not really like this book

cristina — April 24, 2015
i like the story because it has motor bikes in it

cody — April 4, 2016
why are your stories soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

erica — April 24, 2015
this one was short

hi — December 28, 2015
this is very nace my favourite game is santas game

maria — November 18, 2006
this is very iteresant

noelia — November 18, 2006
lo que mas me gusta de esto es el juego de santa claus

yaiza — November 18, 2006
i like the games an this is very nace

esther — November 18, 2006
esto es muy bonito por los juegos

rocio, yaiza, esther, noelia, maria. — November 18, 2006
I LIKE THE STORY IT IS GREAT.

CHELSEA — December 1, 2006
very nice story
very toching story as well

SHERYL — April 14, 2007
greast

MONIKIHAMA — April 14, 2007
GreAt stOrY
ExCEllEnt StoRy
WanDERFuLl StoRy

CYNTHIA — April 14, 2007
Hello Bertie,
It is a wanderful story……….
Please write more stories on Princess Beartirce.

Sheryl — May 1, 2007
good

isaac — August 3, 2007
I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORIES.

LOVE
PRATHNA PATEL

prathna — November 10, 2007
Hi Prantha, Thanks for your nice comment !

Bertie — November 10, 2007
what present did you give to your son or doughter

cristina erica michael — April 24, 2015
yaeh

cristina erica michael — April 24, 2015
Gooooooooooooooooooooood

Anonymous — June 16, 2015
thank you very much ????

aminah — November 17, 2007
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Bedtime Stories « Mga Muni-muni — November 23, 2007
I Like the story IT’S A FANTASTIC STORY

Bob — November 27, 2007
I LIKE THE STORY IT’S FANTASTIC!

BOB — November 27, 2007
I’m from Denmark. And I really enjoyed this story!!!!!!

Morten — November 29, 2007
Thanks for the story. I love the Prince Bertie stories!

Elizabeth6 — December 12, 2007
I LOVE ???

??? — April 28, 2008
I LOVE ???

??? — April 28, 2008
how interesting it is !

na — April 30, 2008
good!

na — April 30, 2008
I celebrate christmas. story was a good one.

Bill — June 18, 2008
this is fantastic story! keep telling wonderful story Natasha 🙂

nash — July 25, 2008
cool

annie — August 16, 2008
this is a fantatic story. keep tellng wondeful storys natasha

annie — August 16, 2008
BRETIE IM STILL WAITIN FOR STORY

ANSWER ME PLZ — August 21, 2008
Y LOVE CHIRSTMAS STORY IS THE BEST EVER STORY THANK YOU NATSHA FOR READING ME THIS STORY . NOT TO BAD ,AND I LOVE ALL THIS STORY in stori nory…….

monica — September 12, 2008
All the stories are all toooooooooooooooooooooo long!!!!!!!!

Lib — October 1, 2008
bretie is da story ready now?

answer me — December 23, 2008
Hello Answer Me ! Here’s a quick story. Once upon a time there were two sisters called Nooria and Maria. They went down to the pond and saw a frog. Nooria said, “I’m going to kiss that frog and maybe he will turn into a prince and I will marry him and become a princess.” And Maria said, no I’m going to kiss him first, and I will become the princess. And Nooria said, “No you won’t because I saw him first.” So they both kissed him at the same time, and do you know what happened? He turned into two princes. And that’s the story of Norria and Maria. Bye Bye !

Bertie — December 23, 2008
Bertie,how in the world do you come up with these fabulous stories?! You should go on TV one day!!!!!!!!!!!

Your greatest fan,
Michelle Lee^^

Michelle(Bertie fan) — January 13, 2009
thank you ^.^

kim — February 8, 2009
colin is the nastyest carp i’ve ever heard of.

megan — July 29, 2009
bbbbbeeeeerrrrrrtttttiiiiieeeee

megan — July 29, 2009
Hi Megan, Sorry I’m not always here to answer right away, but you are right, Colin can be a bit unpleasant sometimes. And yes, I’m a real true prince, and much better brought up than that carp.

Bertie — July 29, 2009
tell the truth bertie

megan reaves — July 31, 2009
Dear Megan, Cross My heart and hope to die.

Bertie — July 31, 2009
hi birtie i herd that you are a rele. if, you are rele, ware do you live?(in rele live)

neil — September 7, 2009
plz resPOND. ha ha! (i like YOU more then lego`s)

neil (lego monster) — September 10, 2009
birtie, you shod tell natasha to tell beachres that you are bertie. sinpel.

neil (lego monster) — September 16, 2009
realy funny and awesome!!!!!!

chris — October 7, 2009
cool and awasome

dylan — October 7, 2009
“Please reply” Can’t you ask Santa to turn you into Prince Bertie?

Kevan — October 9, 2009
Dear Kevan, thanks for the suggestion. I did ask Santa last year, but as always, he was in such a rush, that he couldn’t stop to help me.

Bertie — October 9, 2009
That’s soooo sad!

Kevan — October 9, 2009
Hi Bertie,
I had told many of my friends to come and listen to your stories, they said they like some of your stories. But sometimes they feel a bit sad when they here some your stories like how you turned into a frog.

Dena

Dena — November 21, 2009
Dear Dena, Thank you for letting us know. If they feel sad, imagine how I feel ! But tell them not to worry. It’s not so bad really being a frog.

Bertie — November 22, 2009
I hope you can turn back into a prince again!

Dena — November 21, 2009
good love it!

sadie — November 23, 2009
a bertie merry christmas

james — December 15, 2009
Poor Colin the carp!

P.S Please have Colin reply .

Elisa — January 2, 2010
it is very nice

aditya — February 7, 2010
Hello, This story was great!! 🙂

Keaton — February 8, 2010
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Anonymous — February 13, 2010
I love Christmas do you Bertie????? I love opening my presents!!!

chantal — March 6, 2010
kool like awesome kool

emma — April 15, 2010
kool like awesome kool

katey — April 15, 2010
(^^^)

katey — April 15, 2010
very very amazing..why do you think Christmas is sad? I don’t think so.don’t know? I have downloaded some Bertie and Katie stories.they load without a fuss a little nor.Funny,Amazing,Nymphful,That’s Storynory!

Anna — December 10, 2010
wow!

Matthew — December 14, 2010
best story in the whole world Bertie u the best author in the world and u will always be Bertie thank prince Bertie

aimet — December 14, 2010
MERRY CHRISTMASS BERTIE:DD

Trish — December 22, 2010
this story is tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo crazy…………..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,////////////????????????????????????????$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$$

ahmed — January 9, 2011
dear bertie,
what is the first book you read?

awsome a dude — January 24, 2011
Do you have anymore Bertie story’s?

Cynthia — March 2, 2011
Dear Cynthia, we are working on some new Bertie stories.

Bertie — March 2, 2011
wow this is the best story ever!

Anonymous — April 13, 2011
really like it!

JJ — April 27, 2011
I love Prince Bertie but I like eatting frog 555

Pednoi — April 27, 2011
i love berties story . and i like storynory.com. i will say all my friends to visit storynory.com. bye

siri — May 19, 2011
you spelt the wrong

opria — July 5, 2011
I love Bertie’s stories.

I am a spanish girl and I hear everyday one or two stories.

Now I speak very good english.

I’m going to tell all my friends to listen storynory

SOFÍA — August 30, 2011
Thank you Sofia. It’s really nice to know that you listen every day and that our stories have helped your English.

Bertie — August 30, 2011
When would onother Bertie story come

FC Barcelona — November 9, 2011
i love this story

lili — November 11, 2011
hi natasha

lili — November 11, 2011
hi natasha u have good storys

lili — November 11, 2011
P:

gisele — November 13, 2011
some of the sentences dont make sence

gizzy — November 30, 2011
it is a beautiful story
thank you

ami — December 13, 2011
It’s very difficult to lisen but it’s very nice and I like it

cherry — January 7, 2012
i love this story its great!!!

Anonymous — February 8, 2012
hi natasha your [email protected]$$$

Anonymous — February 8, 2012
Wow Bertie very good storynory I really liked this one really good christmas story by the way

Jackson — March 22, 2012
bertie do you have a real i pod

gabriel and sofia — May 24, 2012
How come natasha understands the pondlife and the other people don’t?

Yasmin — July 26, 2012
It was a good story personally bertie I am smart and am good at learning people’s secrets not frogs peoples u know what I mean PLZ write back

Awesome — August 4, 2012
i thunk u should delete all the bad commants

dorian — August 24, 2012
i mean think

dorian — August 24, 2012
I think that you sould make stories for 8 to11year old stories as well

Irish — August 30, 2012
Hey yo great book yay go christmas

Anonymous — September 19, 2012
Dear Bertie, make a Hanukkah story,please!!!!!!!!!

Guinea pig — November 16, 2012
MORE ASTROPUPS PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

woof — November 17, 2012
i never knew he had a ipod or ipad

riaab — December 7, 2012
Have u ever played dradle, Bertie?

Guinea pig — December 11, 2012
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ!!!

steve — December 12, 2012
Awesome story!

P.S ( I love this website!)

Wyatt — December 14, 2012
This was great but I have read a better story on this website so I have to say it was not so good

Shanna — December 21, 2012
It was okay but I have read better story’s and better singers like one direction so ut was a terrible endding

Shanna — December 21, 2012
I love your story so much!!!!

Benjamin — January 11, 2013
Hi Bertie! I love this story! Please make another story about the life on the pond, I like them better than the ones about Bertie as a prince.
Love
Storynory fan

Storynory fan — January 18, 2013
I like it a lot. It is great!

Asha — March 5, 2013
I am new To Storyrosy

sddd — March 6, 2013
that is really nice as other stories in storynory.com.

moho — March 18, 2013
I love these bertie stories but there is one thing you could improve if you could stop usig the word “Jolly” you are always using this word “Jolly well” the most so why don’t you use it when needed and use a differnt word hope that helps- Chloe

oh the website i made when i was 4 so it’s not that good but if you make an account it will be a fun game to play!

Chloe — March 22, 2013
Dear Chloe, I don’t think we use “jolly” so much these days – though I take your point.

Bertie — March 26, 2013
Hi bertie check out this story that my sister chloe that wrote to you about using the word Jolly she is a brillant atour infact thats here dream to become one my sister recomended it to me and i just copied it down here it is

the invasion of the chocolate bar

In a building, not a big, big building, though not a small building it was a Normal sized building.
In this very building some excitement was going on, “Hey, Everyone!” cried the inventor “I Just finished the best thing the world has ever seen!” “What, what “cried Mr Monopoly with excitement in his eyes. “I have just created a machine that can turn anything to life” replied The inventor, “Anything, anything even a sausage” Suggested Mr Monopoly “oh yes, It works practically on food” announced the inventor
That very evening when all the inventors had gone home, the care taker, Mr Plump was quickly scoffing a chocolate bar, This was not unusual for Mr Plump Because with a name like “Plump” you could easily guess that this old chap was an over weighted guy in fact if you have never met him before you would mistake him as an elephant in disguise. Well any way back to the story. After scoffing about 16 chocolate bars, the new invention caught his eye, He strolled up to it but checking no one was watching him he decided to try it out. He reached in his pocket for the last chocolate bar; he placed it directly opposite the Machine and was just about to hit the button when he started to have second thoughts. “What about if it does work and the chocolate bar comes to get his revenge as I ate his relatives?” “But what if I break the wonderful creation?” But then a smug smile began to appear in his over sized face, You see as he loved chocolate bars so much he thought the machine would turn it double if a not triple sized. So he reached forward with his chubby arm and pressed the button.
After a long pause the caretaker got bored and thought the machine was a big ripe off. So with disappointment in his eyes he strolled off back home.
As soon as the fat caretaker had left, the chocolate bar had grown two little legs and two little arms and was quietly running around the building at a surprisingly fast speed.
Meanwhile when all this trouble was applauding, a young girl who went by the name of Kaci was getting ready to play a prank on her dad. Kaci was all ways playing pranks on her dad in fact her friends used to call her Chaos Kaci, this was because she was always causing some sort of miss happen wherever she is like the time she put her fake pope in her dad’s drink while she was climbing a mountain I Tibet, or time she tricked her dad in to entering the basement all though it was filled with rats! But on the other hand she was a kind and truthful person who was always giving a hand when it was possible.
The very next day, when the top scientist discovered that the building was full of chocolate bars they ran to call the pest exterminator. But instead of dialling 1101178 they accidently typed in 110118 which happened to be Kaci’s number. As Kaci was a bit of a prankster she did indeed agree to sort the problem out.

Tommy — March 26, 2013
Hi Bertie and Natasha
Is Bertie still a frog and has he married princess Beatrice?

mariah — May 1, 2013
very instering story

kristina — May 1, 2013
Please reply: Bertie, how old are you?

Anonymous — May 19, 2013
When is Bertie going to turn back into a prince?
I’m just starting to try and here all the Bertie story’s!

Gertie — May 29, 2013
Hi I love your stories Bertie make more of your stories!My favorite one is the selfish giant
I loved this one more!I don’t know how to make a website

Tiff — July 17, 2013
I loved the story Bertie will you make more?I would love more!:)
Here’s a story I made up its called the bear who didn’t need help!
Once there was a bear cub named cece she told everyone she did not need help
Even Carrie they are best friends.One day while a bee was next to her
She screamed ehhhh!Helo Carrie! you said you did not need help.said Carrie
Well now I do!said cece.Oka there you go!Thanks Bbff best bear fried for ever!
Said cece.That was the story Of the bear who did not need help!

Tiffany — July 17, 2013
Excuse me please, Natasha(can I call you Nat) and Bertie. I have a few questions.
Q1: How old is Bertie.
Q2: When did he change into a frog and when will he change back into a prince. Oh maybe Nat will kiss him and he will change back, just like in the story.

Princess — July 28, 2013
too short

legodude batman iron man — July 31, 2013
Your The Best I Love You Bertie

James — August 13, 2013
You Have A IPod I Bet

James — August 13, 2013
I Hope Bertie Turn Into A Frog

Poopy — August 17, 2013
I LOVE YOUR STORY’S YOUR THE BEST AND YOUR THE BEST BERTE
DEER JAMES

James — August 17, 2013
MARIO IS BEST THEN YOU POOPY FACE

Blah Lol — September 4, 2013
Hi. I wanna say that your stories r the bet!11! ( btw best lol XD ) Astropups the beat (best XD :O ) lol bye btw

Mr woof woof — September 21, 2013
Hello Bertie

I want to tell you that it’s not long to Christmas. Properly you will get Christmas on the pond this time. Well that’s all I wanted to say merry Christmas.

Gage — October 7, 2013
Hey Bertie ,I have a joke for you
What time is it when an elephant sits on your fence? Answer: time to get a new fence!

Sara — October 8, 2013
Dear Sara Ha ! Ha !

Bertie — October 9, 2013
hi I am dorianb from phinnoccio chapter(last chapter) I have a joke, what did the parent say to another parent? APPARENTLY! and this what do penguins have for lunch? ICEBERGERS and whats a witches fav food? SANDWITCHES and why did 6 not like 7? because 7 8 9!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! some random kid named hunter in my class ALWAYS said the 6789 joke is it popular? idk anyway again nice stories goodbye

oreodelux — October 19, 2013
Dear Ordeodeulx / Dorianb Thank you for the Jokes – HA HA !

Bertie — October 20, 2013
Dear Bertie (Can I call you “Bert”?), I have read all of your Storynories and you haven’t turned back into a prince. I want you to be BEYOND HAPPY and marry Princess Beatrice. Also I some times look at pictures of frogs, copy them on the paper and make them look like you.

Toju and Febie and Telon — November 14, 2013
Dear Toju and Febie and Telon, thank you for all your efforts on my behalf. I am sure I will get there (back into a Prince) one day soon with so many people trying so hard. Happy Christmas ! – a little early I know.

Bertie — November 14, 2013
Really good Bertie and a merry christmas to you I will hopefully come round to you and bring you and your friends a special something

Ellie-May — December 8, 2013
kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll

Anonymous — December 13, 2013
Sorry Natasha for not replying. Do you really and truly know where Bertie is?! Is he the frog i picked up this morning? Don’t tell me he is a frog!

Princess Beatrice — March 7, 2014
I wold love to spend a chrismas with you.I wold go down to the pond and bring some presents for all the pond-life

Reina — May 16, 2014
Bertie, can I write a skit of this story? I’ll send it to you after I’m finished if you would like me to!

clare — May 17, 2014
Dear Clare, of course, do send it to me.

Bertie — May 18, 2014
My joke
1 why did the cow sneeze? Because it had hay fever
2. Why was 6 scared of 7. Because 7 8 9

Chloe — May 21, 2014
I am really Anakin but I am not evil yet

Anakin — June 4, 2014
What is Christmas? In the galaxy we don’t have it

Anakin — June 7, 2014
the audio has been deleted

luis — June 21, 2014
I like these story’s and can you make them longer oh and is princess bertice as beautiful as you say Bertie

Aeryn — July 21, 2014
i liked this story

ella — August 12, 2014
amazing

abby — November 23, 2014
Which one is first

Anonymous — December 19, 2014
Someone please tell me which Bertie story is first

don't know where to begin — December 21, 2014
Hello, don’t know where to begin,
Bertie’s Christmas story is first. So you are at the right place. Just follow on each story in order from here. Happy listening!

Jana Elizabeth — December 22, 2014
Thanks
Love your stories

don't know where to begin — December 23, 2014
Your next story should be called “Tim the tadpole grows up

Ray — January 1, 2015
Your next story should be called “Tim the tadpole grows up”.

Ray — January 2, 2015
One question Bertie. Please answer. What does it taste like to eat flies or at least have that kind of tounge. In your opinion please. THANK YOUUUU

Ella — January 30, 2015
Dear Bertie,
Where do you live?Are you really a modern prince?

listener 25444564 — January 30, 2015
This story @#$% stupid

Jaws unleashed — February 17, 2015
I thought the story was really good !!!!!!!!!!!

Liam — February 17, 2015
Cool good work

Lil — February 20, 2015
I really love it

alliyah — May 12, 2015
I tried to play this audiobook and it didn’t work but tried some others and they did so can you re download onto site
P.s. The others I listened to were really good!
Sophie
________
xx

Sophie — November 9, 2015
Thanks for letting us know, Sophie. Bertie will look at it.

Jana Elizabeth — November 9, 2015
nice story

kenya — December 3, 2015
nice story , i really liked it

kenya — December 3, 2015
Hey Bertie! I loved that story! And today is Christmas Eve! My daddy’s birthday is tomorrow and I received lots of resents today. It is a family tradition to open the presents on Christmas Eve. Can you do me a favor? Please put me in one of your story’s. I gt the story idea for you and you can write it in your nice fashion! 🙂 so, a princess called Ariel found Bertie in the royal kitchen trying to steal a piece of chocolate because he missed it soooooo much! She went there (the kitchen) to do likewise. So she takes him to her room. Cuddles him kiss him and when she kissed him, he turned into a prince! And Ariel was like. “Wow!”
He only lasted for a few minutes (because Ariel is not his true love) and while he was like that, he quick
Y asked her to call Beatrice and everything about himself like the pond and all. So Ariel goes and get Beatrice and by the time she arrives with Beatrice Bertie turned into a frog again. But Beatrice kisses him and he turned back into a human! Then maybe he and her get married and have two children. The boy is named after the king. And the girl s named after the princess. (I don’t know the kings name) (berries father I mean).
Hope you like my ideas and please answer on Christmas that is tomorrow. And I have another stray idea for you guys. It’s called super Bertie! And it is abut Bertie and he found a super power source and became the super hero royalty! And you can make untie rest. Please please oh ddoooooo please answer me tomorrow. P.s. I live in eton and England. Just England. In eton. If you like to have my email I would like to give it to you. I’ll like to you guys often. Because sometimes the comments button does not work. And sometimes I can’t get connection in my own house! Please reply bye! 🙂 love- Ariel.

Ariel — December 24, 2015
i love your storeys

~Esther

bIlE — January 4, 2016
This story is amazing?

Movie maker — February 15, 2016
It is so short

Olivia — March 3, 2016
sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good

henry — March 8, 2016
This story is really nice! I hope you d more like it. Bertie? can we have a christmas story starring little Tim? I think that would be great

Kat — June 13, 2016
nice

Matthew 557 — June 13, 2016
that book was great i loved it it was the most awesome books i have ever read
i love store nory .com its the best thing ever.

happy flowers — September 16, 2016
kind of boring

Athena — October 16, 2016
this story is good

Nathan — October 24, 2016
Weird

ed — October 31, 2016
Amaze!!!! !!?????

Zoe — December 21, 2016
good but short.
☺☺☺☺☺☺❄❄❄❄❄

Clara — January 4, 2017
I like it

Anonymous — February 27, 2017
i like the story because it was fun

krista — March 2, 2017
Good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ENZO — March 21, 2017
I’m 28.

it’s only been a short time to starting learn english
actually, seem to like Bertie’s story myself
thank you

minho — March 30, 2017
I loved this story

Lexi10 — April 7, 2017
i hate it

clayton — April 10, 2017
this book was terrible

Anonymous — April 14, 2017
I like the book

Sean — April 24, 2017
no because it was boring

Anonymous — May 1, 2017
I like this book because it was a great book and it had a lot of details.Also I like this book because Bertie and Beatrice books.

Jonila — May 2, 2017
I love it and Christmas.

Nidhi — May 7, 2017
wow that is a fantastic story i like listening to it thank you for putting it up on storynory i love it

irae — May 11, 2017
nice story

jade — May 24, 2017
That’s a nice storry

AS — June 3, 2017
How does the vegetable patch look like

Anonymous — July 3, 2017
It’s good but what happened at last?

Addie Jiang — July 10, 2017
i hate it

peter — August 22, 2017
i really like this story

Luke — August 22, 2017
that was a good story

rianna — August 23, 2017
ilove yuo,r story

levi — August 29, 2017
who is mr frosty

cool — September 5, 2017
Storynory is best It helps me sleep

Clairerande — September 8, 2017
Hi this is Claire can you right a story about pumkin pie or maple syrup please and thank you

Claire — September 8, 2017
this was so awesome u loved it!

Heiress — September 12, 2017
amazing story i loved it good story

Heiress Charles — September 13, 2017
I really like this story:)

aliyah — October 16, 2017
i love it

Anonymous — October 19, 2017
I love the story and like the game.

Daniel May 8 2014 — October 28, 2017
not christmas yet

cesar — November 3, 2017
This is a touching story! I love it very much. Thank you for the story. I felt moody these days but the story cheered me up! I love the story! It warmed my heart up. Have a lovely Christmas!

Jane — November 4, 2017
Great

Jane — November 4, 2017
It was a very sad story and I nearly cried

Julian — November 4, 2017
i didn’t even read it because it’s so boring and almost made me fall asleep because the story is not even good or fun it’s boring

andy — November 17, 2017
Dear Bertie, what are mints pies?

Perry5Platypus — November 18, 2017
Mince pies are a sweet desert usually eaten around the Xmas period. Shortcrust pastry cases filled with mincemeat (not beef or lamb)
– apple purée, currants, orange peel, syrup etc.

Jana Elizabeth — November 18, 2017
you need to make it a little bit sorter with the story so more people will read your good story and i hope my friends will to so make the story shorter ok.

anishya — November 27, 2017
i don’t get it how can tim climb if he dose not have legs

melinda — November 28, 2017
good story

Anonymous — November 30, 2017
love this story

Anonymous — December 4, 2017
a good story

motaher — December 6, 2017
i think its ok and u should make it shorter

niya — December 6, 2017
I like it very much.Can Bertie repliey?What coloer is Tom?

Lyra Jan 17,2018 — January 17, 2018
I love ur storys

Ledion — January 22, 2018
Can you do one called saidy’s Christmas fest ware the Royal Christmas fest tradition is goose and the supermarket ran out so the cook takes saidy and Bertie has to rescue her

Sophia — January 31, 2018
i love this storynory story

caseybarnes — February 6, 2018
thank you

chloe — February 22, 2018
i like this story so much

HANA — February 25, 2018
I like this story!

grady — March 1, 2018
This story is a good story!

This story is very good

This story is very good

grady — March 1, 2018
I like your book

rose — March 12, 2018
no

up — March 14, 2018
This book is awesome

Ban — March 15, 2018
It’s a good story.

Sean — March 26, 2018
i liked this story , it is very enjoy 🙂

alanzi — April 3, 2018
i love this

porfggg — May 8, 2018
guys i love your stories there so good when i get bored i watch your guys storys thats how good they are

saige — May 17, 2018