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Astropup and Marlow’s Metamorphosis

Story by Bertie.
Read by Richard.
Proofread by Jana Elizabeth.

We are continuing the adventures of Astropup and his friends the parrot and the human, Marlow. At the end of the previous episode, a strange person called Buddy, half human, half dog, made Marlow an offer: he could become rich beyond his dreams so long as he agreed to swallow a pill that would turn him into a man-dog. Do you think Marlow would accept such an offer? Astropup will reveal all.

Marlow’s face twitched nervously. He said to Buddy, “You’re kidding, right?”

“By woof I’ve never been so serious in my life!” exclaimed Buddy. “What better way for humans to learn of their inner canine instincts, than to see an example of a rich and successful dog man? I would do it myself, but I am busy here managing the football league on this side of the galaxy.”

“Well,” said Marlow, “thanks but no thanks. It’s not a deal I can do. Once again, I’m glad you found happiness as a dog, and I’m proud to say that of my two best friends, one is furry and four-footed, but as for myself, I like being human and I intend to stay that way.”

“Suit yourself,” said Buddy. “I hope you enjoy being poor, because I could have made you the richest dog-man on Earth.”

“Poor, but human,” said Marlow.

We wished our strange host goodnight, and returned via the sky-train to our kennels. I was looking forward to one more sound sleep under the influence of good old gravity before returning to our spaceship and resuming our weightless wanderings. I curled up but as I was dozing off, my ears waggled with the sound of my friends talking.

The parrot was saying, “Of all the conundrums and contradictions we've come across in this universe, a super-intelligent dog is the strangest yet.”

“Astropup always says a dog is not about intelligence, but about love,” agreed Marlow, “which is why a computer will never replace him. But I don’t see much evidence of a dog’s heart in Buddy.”

“He’s living proof that a hairy face and a wet nose don’t make a dog,” said the parrot. “It’s what’s going on, or not going on, inside that counts. A dog needs a warm heart and no more than three thoughts in his brain - loyalty, food, and walkies. If he thinks any more than that on a regular basis, he’s no more of a dog than you or I.”

I dozed off, happy that I had finally understood a clever conversation between my friends. Yes, I thought. A dog is about more than just a wet nose and a hairy face. How true, how very, very true…ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!

In the morning, the lights of the artificial planet gradually brightened. It was a new day. I had the overwhelming question in my head... what’s for breakfast?

As I was pondering this matter of great interest, I opened one eye. I could see across the way into Marlow’s kennel. He had trouble fitting his 6 foot two inch body into it, poor fellow. But it seemed that he had gone to sleep elsewhere, because his spot was occupied by a dog that I had not seen before. He wasn't a breed I recognised but he was strangely familiar. He might have had a bit of bloodhound in him.

Perhaps he had a doggy sense that I was looking at him, for he too opened an eye and for a moment we gazed at each other in monovision.

“Rrrrr, Good morning, old friend,” he said.

Now this was a turn up for the books. The dog across the way spoke in human language. This is a feat that I manage for storytelling via an alien technological loopy thing that is built into our recording studio here. But there was no such loopy thing overthere. He just spoke like a human, only with a bit of gravel. In fact, he sounded rather like Marlow.

“Hello,” I answered back in our doggy woofy language. “Who are you?”

He started to haul himself out of his kennel, in an odd, not very dogged sort of a way, and then, after rolling a bit on his back to satisfy an itch, he stood up on two legs.

Now, I’m not really a guard dog, but when somebody strange comes along, like the postman or a creature whose half human half dog, I can’t help myself. I have to bark, “Woof woof woof!”

“Calm down Astropup,” said the dog man.

“Hey, that is Marlow's voice,” I said. “What have you done with him?”

The dog man put his head on one side, puzzled like.

“He’s not done anything with him,” said another familiar voice. I turned my head and saw that the parrot was perched on the roof of his kennel holding a little budgie mirror. It was a free gift, courtesy of management, along with a water bottle and some seed.

“Just take a look at yourself,” he squawked.

“I know I could do with a shower and a shave,” said the strange person - a most unlikely thought for any type of dog, I must say.

The parrot fluttered over and held up the mirror to him.

“Who’s that?” asked the stranger who had stolen Marlow’s voice. He was peering at his own reflection - not very bright even by canine standards.

“It’s you, Marlow,” squawked the parrot. “You’ve turned into a dog.”

“Oh no!” said Marlow. And then he looked up at the sky of our artificial world and let out the most pitiful howl:

“AROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!”

He sat down and held his head in his paws.

“How can this be?” he whimpered. “Didn’t I say no way Jose to the idea of becoming a dog?”

“Well,” said the parrot, “there is only one explanation. Our friend Buddy did not need your permission to crush one of his dog pills into your food last night. He’s determined that you and indeed all humans should turn into dog people like him, whether they agree or not.”

“You know what the worst thing about this situation is?” said Marlow.

“You mean the future of the human race is in doubt?” asked the parrot.

“Well there’s that, but right now, I’ve got an irresistible urge to scratch my ear with my hind foot. Astropup how do you live like this?”

“Oh, it’s easy,” I said. “I just scratch.”

Marlow looked so sad that I felt I had to give him some words of comfort. “Look, cheer up old friend, a dog’s life is not so bad. All you need is a kind master, and you’re set for life, especially if they let you sleep on the sofa. You haven’t tried dog food yet, have you? It’s delicious. And ‘fetch the ball’ is the best sport in the Universe, next to running into a flock of geese and setting them off honking and flapping. Honestly, it’s great being a dog.”

Marlow did not look cheered up - not one bit. He hung his head like a dog in the rescue pound, and said quietly, “Please don’t take offence Astropup my friend but…” And then, after a short pause, he threw his head up in the air and howled. “Can’t anyone understand? I don’t want to be a dog!!!!!!!!!!”

“Can’t say I blame you,” said the parrot. “Let’s get back to the spaceship. I need to work on my computer.”

It took us a while to remember where we parked our ship, but Marlow sniffed it out eventually. Back inside the familiar but not so comfortable surroundings, the parrot started to work on his computer, while Marlow curled up on the sofa in my favourite spot. Well, I let him have it for now, because he wasn’t having a good day. The parrot said:

“Astropup, what’s the dog password?”

“I can’t tell you that,” I said. “It’s the biggest secret we dogs have.”

“Well if you can’t share that information with us, then I’m afraid I can’t save Marlow.”

Marlow jumped off the sofa and adopted a begging position on his knees with his front paws hanging down at the floor. “Oh, oh please Astropup,” he panted. “Do tell the parrot the dog password. It’s my only chance.”

This was a difficult one. Should I be loyal to dog-kind or to my friends?

The parrot squinted his eyes and said:

“I promise to forget it as soon as I’ve used it.”

“Oh well alright then, so long as you cross your heart and hope to die, I’ll tell you,” I said.

“Go on then,” said the parrot. His beak paused above the keyboard of the computer.

“The password,” I said in a low voice, “is woof woof woof.”

“Is that it?” asked the parrot. “Woof woof woof?”

“Yes, it is the greatest secret known to dogs,” I said.

“Typical. Too stupid to guess,” said the parrot, and he tapped it into the computer. “Right-oh - here we are. I’ve hacked into Buddy’s laptop. He’s not so smart as he thinks, hey? Now, I need to find the formula for his dog pill. I suspect it’s under pills. Nope, here it is. He’s filed it under ‘genius inventions’. Let no one accuse him of false modesty.”

“Have you remembered to forget the password?” I asked, because that was the deal we had struck.

“Shut up, I’m working,” said the parrot, and for the next two hours he studied Buddy’s formula for the pill that turns humans into dogs.

At last he woke Marlow and me from our slumbers with a loud cry of “Eureka!”

“Woof woof!” said Marlow excitedly, before looking embarrassed with his tail between his legs and correcting himself. “Whoops, I mean, fantastic! You’ve found something.”

“I have indeed,” said the parrot. “All it takes is for me to change this little ‘1’ here into a ‘-1’ and the entire process is reversed. This becomes a pill to turn a dog person otherwise known as a werewolf back into a human.”

“A werewolf? I hadn’t thought of it like that,” said Marlow. “That’s even more creepy. Well go on, do it. What’s holding you back?”

“I have already changed the formula,” said the parrot.”

“Well I don’t feel any change.”

“Well you wouldn’t, would you? My dear dumb dogman, you haven’t taken the pill yet. We need to run one off on a pill making machine. I saw such a machine in the corner of Buddy’s room. You wait here, and I’ll go back and ask him to give me a few of these pills for the dog cure.”

“Do you think he will?”

“Yes, I do,” said the parrot, who was already making his way over to the exit chute.

And so we sat down and waited. Marlow, who had only about 12 hours practice at being a dog, was not yet very good at curling up and going to sleep with one ear open to listen out for the postman. He was impatient and kept on pacing up and down.

“Now I know what Noah felt like when he was in the ark waiting for the dove to come back with a leaf in its beak,” he said. “Only this time we’re expecting a parrot with a tablet.”

We waited, and waited, and waited and waited… until, at last, the parrot flung open the door of the airlock and said, “Ta! Ta!”

In doing so, not one, but three little tablets dropped onto the floor of the spaceship.

“Wow,” said Marlow. “Will that little tablet turn me back into a man?”

“Fetch a drink of water,” said the parrot.

Marlow came hurrying back from the tap with a syringe full of water. We were equipped to squirt water into our mouths in the weightlessness of space, or else it might have gone flying all over the place. He popped the pill onto his tongue and washed it down his throat with water.

“I don’t feel anything yet,” he said.

“You will… in 12 hours time,” said the parrot.

“Why did Buddy give you the pills?” I asked.

“Because,” said the parrot, “he had no idea that I had reversed their effect. He was happy to print them off the machine after I told him that I would slip them into the food of the World President, the singer, Fiancé, and the Archbishop of Canterbury. They would all turn into dogs and then everyone would want to follow suit, where as in actual fact, we could use one on Marlow to turn him back into our human companion of old, and I’ve kept two, just in case.”

“Just out of interest,” I said, “what would happen if I ate one?”

“That would be extremely unpredictable,” said the parrot. “Perhaps you might become smart.”

“Oh, I wouldn’t want that,” I said. “Besides, they don’t look like they would taste very nice. I’ll stick to Waggies, my favourite cheesy treats.”

“Yes, you do that,” said the parrot.

And before taking off we lay down and waited for Marlow to turn back into a human.

Thankyou Astropup. We’ll leave you there. Hopefully Marlow will be back to normal by the time of the next episode.
For now, from me, Richard, at Storynory.com.
Goodbye!

Astropup

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Ariel hi – so glad you are listening after all these years.

Imogen – my stories come out of my experiences and interests but also they seem to grow out of the characters. I thought that Marlow turning into a dog against his will was a funny idea. There are some hints in books I have read like Heart of the Dog by Bulgarkov and Metamorphosis by Kafka but I think they are no more than hints. Still if you want to write it helps if you read a lot and are interested in people and their funny ways.

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John
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I think he will take the pill.

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Lily — May 11, 2017
L!O!L! I love it!
The Parrot is sassy though.
But woof woof woof is such a silly password!

Chelsea!!!!!!!! :):):):):):):) — May 11, 2017
its so so so so so so so so so funnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sam — May 12, 2017
yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111111111233245

sam — May 12, 2017
I love its so much.

Austin — May 13, 2017
I loved it 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎

Tyler — May 14, 2017
Bad story

Rhys — May 15, 2017
awesome book 😉

Alex — May 15, 2017
awesome

isla — May 15, 2017
it was super good

maysen — May 15, 2017
Amazing book

Jeff — May 15, 2017
awesome + cool

isla — May 15, 2017
this book is funny

hayley — May 15, 2017
It was cool

gabriel — May 15, 2017
I hate this book but I did not reed it.

drew/the doctor — May 15, 2017
cool book

dead pool — May 15, 2017
its a dog man lol never herd

hacker at pixel gun 3d — May 16, 2017
I love iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

zac — May 16, 2017
lovely

austin — May 16, 2017
loved it

blake — May 16, 2017
I did not just like it I loved it. It was funny and cool.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.Thank You.

Brylie — May 16, 2017
weird but funny…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

Berliew — May 16, 2017
this book is funny

zach — May 17, 2017
this is a funny book

zach — May 17, 2017
it was long but good

anthony — May 17, 2017
No

Bob — May 18, 2017
Its ok

josh — May 18, 2017
boring but kinda doesn’t make since

josh — May 18, 2017
this book is coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

carters — May 18, 2017
I love it

hunter — May 19, 2017
Cool man 😎😊😀😺

Declan — May 19, 2017
I love puppies so I love the story😸

Natalie — May 19, 2017
awesome

mrcoffee — May 19, 2017
Its a amazing story but out of 10 I say 6 out of 12💯😢😢😢😢😢😢😎😍👌🏾

Maleeka — May 19, 2017
This is a good time to read this book.

Pablo — May 19, 2017
I love it

THx — May 22, 2017
I love it so much!!

Wrynlee_May 21 2017

wrynlee — May 22, 2017
I love there righting and I love to read this

Isabella A. — May 22, 2017
Oh my god I loved this story so much, would read your books any time!!!!!

Phibe — May 22, 2017
it is amzing

kade — May 23, 2017
nice

Anonymous — May 24, 2017
it was funny

logan — May 24, 2017
Amazing book Very interesting.

Anynomus — May 24, 2017
love the story 😛

Kanyon dumonceax — May 25, 2017
Amasing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love it!

Anna-Maria — May 27, 2017
i cant keep up with the amount of astro pup story’s because they have no numbers so please please put numbers on the ep

uriah — May 29, 2017
The parrot is so crepy i dont trust him

Rodrigo — May 30, 2017
I loved this book it was awesome!!!

Brandon — May 30, 2017
Love it !

I’m thinking they go back home and ,allowed thinks it’s finally over and that he will get paid by the prez but I think buddy will find out Marlowe is still human and get mad and Invade earth.

If my guess good plz tell me . thx

Ps what is parrot s name I’m hoping its Bob

Katie — May 31, 2017
love it

tdog — June 2, 2017
Bertie if you could JUMP right into making a sequel I would appreciate it very much. Thank you. plz reply(brother would like it)

King pug — June 3, 2017
Hello King pug,
A new Astropup is on its way!

Jana Elizabeth — June 3, 2017
Good story by the way

King pug — June 3, 2017
cool , i would like u to add more females though

kat — June 5, 2017
Yes I like with story you are an great story teller

Shenna — June 5, 2017
I love this book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Diontae — June 5, 2017
I love this book!!!!

Diontae — June 5, 2017
Why is this not on the archives?
Please reply

Sam — June 29, 2017
Dear Sam, Many thanks for pointing out that this wasn’t listed properly. I’ve changed it now.

Bertie — June 29, 2017
Good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Augustin — August 2, 2017
need more astropup stories! more more more more more more more more! they are amazing! wicked uncle is second best!

Rogue_Shadow^^ — August 11, 2017
yeah good

Sean — August 24, 2017
Poor Marlow 🙁
Wired but awesome story!
I love the way Richard reeds. Thank you for brightening my everything with Astropup

Edith — August 29, 2017
i love it

zane — September 7, 2017
Okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Good — September 21, 2017
this was my first book i read it and the first time i read it it was cool i love it

mayra — October 3, 2017
i love it
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Jordan Jones — October 5, 2017
I love it

Israel — October 26, 2017
I love astropup storys they are cool.

Girlpugsquad900 — November 4, 2017
I LOVED THIS STORY SO MUCH AND I HOPE YOU ENJOY IT TO !

kaylee — November 8, 2017
cool

Tyler — November 19, 2017
What if you made Astropup have a brother?

Perry5platypus — December 9, 2017
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;):)

Wow — December 19, 2017
Rubbish story

Anonymous — January 5, 2018
bertie, this story doesn’t show up in the astropup archives. can you fix that?

p.s. great story!

Rogue_Shadow^^ — January 6, 2018
Hi rogue thanks I will fix it

Bertie — January 6, 2018
Hi Bertie a new story about Astropup could be Astropup mistakes one of the pills for waggies and swallows it then becomes an intelligent human🐕🌟🕴🏻

PINK LLAMAS💕💕💕💕🐐🐐🐐🐐 — March 12, 2018
Thanks for your idea, Pink Llamas

Jana Elizabeth — March 12, 2018
Thx for your reply Jana pls make my idea into a story pls Bertie pls with whipped cream Cherry’s sprinkles fluffy bunnies and fairie floss on top🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐🐐

PINK LLAMAS💕💕💕💕🐐🐐🐐🐐 — March 19, 2018
noice. i like this story. next one, please.
i would also like some more greek myths. (and possibly chapters of harry potter, but i won’t get picky)

Henry — March 23, 2018
Can you do one where Astropup turns into a human and marlo turns into a dog
It was the best story so far well done!
Oh can you do one about an astrokitten and an astroparrot because I’ve been searching on storynory but I can’t find it 😪😪 so pleeassssseee do those story’s soon(please reply )
I sleep like a dog. I curl up and put my hand on my nose!

Evie is a dog lover — March 27, 2018
To long story but love it 💘 cool story 😎

Leila — March 31, 2018
This is da best Astro-pup next to the best hot dog in the world. Please reply.

From yours truly, Renate

STORY NORY FAN #1 — April 24, 2018
This is coming from America and I always try to say wat u r saying in that cool a accent of urs. (I always end up making a fool out of myself btw I’m eight)😘😍

From yours truly, Renate

STORY NORY LOVER — April 24, 2018
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. alright. i like greek myths more. could we do more of those?

daguybur — April 28, 2018
LOVE IT SO COOL

GRACE — April 29, 2018
Good😀love astropup🐶🐶🐶

Ester — May 19, 2018
I think it’s sad

trevor — May 23, 2018
boring and fake.

ricky — May 24, 2018
Good job storynory!

Anonymous — June 19, 2018
Love it🐶 can u do a astropup with a 🐋 an a🐬?

Thx!

– u know who I am

Anonymous — June 19, 2018
What should we call dog Marlo? MarloPup!? XD

Anonymous — June 19, 2018
Woof woof woof Translation: dear astropup could you do a story we’re you come back to earth 🌏 and find Jennie
Please reply

Henry — July 21, 2018
Dear Henry we will find jennie one day !

Bertie — July 21, 2018
i already know that marlon is a human i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sabina and Sevara — October 12, 2018
I liked it its interesting.

Anonymous — December 4, 2018
This is good story

Ur mom — January 14, 2019
dis it gud

barney — January 15, 2019
I really want to know what is gonna happen. Yay!

Kat — January 16, 2019
Marlow: good morning old friend
Astropup: *thinking* he doesn’t usually sound this… doggy *marlow walks out of crate* astropup: U HAVE STOLEN MARLOW’S VOICE!!! O MY GOOOSH
Marlow: what do you mean boi or should I say dog
Astropup: look in da mirror
*marlow looks in the mirror* O MY GAAAAAASH NOOOOO AROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NO plEs nOooOOoO

Jana Elizabeth I really want you to say this is funny I tried my best

P.s. can you make a story about astropup turning into a human???? XD

Matthew — January 18, 2019
Aww thank you Matthew, that was fun to read. I can see you’re very fond of Astropup stories! We’ll make sure there’s a new exciting adventure for you soon 😜

Jana Elizabeth — January 18, 2019
Hey….. could u guys make a story with Jenny in it? (What I mean is like she goes in the spaceship with astropup)

Matthew — January 18, 2019
Thanks for the idea, Matthew. We’ll keep it in mind.

Jana Elizabeth — January 18, 2019
Hi Matthew Thanks for all your fabulous Astropup ideas

Bertie — January 18, 2019
its great

Anonymous — March 11, 2019
Dear Bertie,

I feel like the comments are deleting my comments can you please fix it? I hope you can make a new story pretty please 🙏

Knox — April 26, 2019
that was so funny

Anonymous — July 1, 2019
i love it

Hiya — July 23, 2019
SO COOL

Anonymous — September 19, 2019
I love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Alison, Fiona — March 12, 2017 — February 2, 2020
Ilove it

Vaibhav — April 26, 2020
What’s next? Can’t wait to read the next one!

Tanya — May 29, 2020

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